The Firing of ANZAC Landing
It is 2am on the 25th of April 1915. I’m in an old boat wondering if I will survive. I am scared a bullet would go through my head. We are not able to see anything. I can smell fear all around me. I am holding my gun as if I would break it. I am shaking with fear. I see a bullet go through the boat. The Turks started firing at us. Lots of soldiers are jumping off the boat. I felt a bullet go through my leg my friends blood was all around me as I fell on to the ground of the boat as I was going to die.
I am learning to write an interesting recount.
I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.
It can be tricky to the right adjectives for the right sentence.
The thesaurus can help me by giving me better words.
The next step for me in my learning is to write in paragraphs.
1 comment:
This is a very descriptive recount. You have chosen your words carefully to add tension to your story. I like your ending. It makes me want to read more. Good Job !
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